Ajg3332's Builder Application

ajg3332

The Sad Veteran
This is my second time posting a builder app and this time i have a ROLLERCOASTER!! If you are vip you can do /warp svmx and find the rollercoaster in the town. The real coords are x:72841, z:-49840. ENJOY
 

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PD400

Sentient Toaster
Is this near spawn? The landscape beneath it looks like a desolate wasteland. I suggest you replace the sand and generally nuked area with grass and trees, or smooth stone and make it look like a smooth rollercoaster. As for the coaster itself, the use of the cobblestone is rather offputting. Those interior tunnels appear rather...ugly, really, with the hodgepodge of gravel, smooth, and cobble along the walls.

I would say you have the beginning of something, but you still need to put more work into it.
 

sup3r1337pwn3r48

The Soviet Mexican
Is this near spawn? The landscape beneath it looks like a desolate wasteland. I suggest you replace the sand and generally nuked area with grass and trees, or smooth stone and make it look like a smooth rollercoaster. As for the coaster itself, the use of the cobblestone is rather offputting. Those interior tunnels appear rather...ugly, really, with the hodgepodge of gravel, smooth, and cobble along the walls.

I would say you have the beginning of something, but you still need to put more work into it.
This.
 

aportex

The Cyber-Hillbilly
oh gosh is this your what? 5th builder application? :laugh:
This is my second time posting a builder app and this time i have a ROLLERCOASTER!! If you are vip you can do /warp svmx and find the rollercoaster in the town. The real coords are x:72841, z:-49840. ENJOY
No reason to mock him for not being accepted the first time...

I really wanna love your creation, but I think it lacks innovation.
On one of your pictures you show a nether zone, maby make more ''zones''
Example: Nether zone, desert zone, grassland zone, underground zone.
Remember Minecraft gives you the opportunity, to make pretty much anything.

Never the less, good luck with your application.
 

ajg3332

The Sad Veteran
Ill take all of your ideas into consideration. Thanks for the help. Mods please dont post stuff yet i will post new pics very soon
 

DoomVorlor

Lord of the Halfsteps
This is just a skeleton, you still have to put all of the meat and bones and all of that fun stuff into it.
You could easily revamp this into something amazing, and i think its going to take you at least a week in order to successfully do so.
 

WakiMikoArck

Some would call me Tim
Thank-you for applying for Builder status on our Creative world.

The mods have decided to Decline your application. You may re-apply in 7 days.

Don't feel disheartened that we have declined your appeal, with some extra hard work you may be successful next time!

How you can improve -
  • More details! You have cool ideas, we'd just like to see more creativity lent to each one
We appreciate the time you have taken for your application, good luck next time :)
 
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