I'm not on the boat with those who think the inside means nothing; I think doing the inside of a structure quite obviously takes just as much skill as doing the outside (and to me, it's much harder). For this reason I like the structure.
What I see is someone capable of doing things in non-standard ways. This isn't necessarily beautiful, but it is innovative, and that can be just as important. I'm not sure this deserves builder, but I definitely think you're capable of doing something that does. If I were you I'd extend the structure in the fourth image into something more elaborate and connect it with the tower. Materials variety on the exterior is also an issue. Whether they accept or decline you, I do think you have a large amount of potential. You have original down; just go for pretty now.
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