Feir's Builder App. (Trolls Welcome)

[Frenziedfox]

This is my second attempt at a builders application. I hope it goes better than last time. For this, I decided to build a steampunk-ish style airship, christened "Derpship" by the (mysteriously lacking) crew.
This is the ship as seen from the ground. (Shot in the CC General pack)

And here is a closer view of the smaller fighter-ship being deployed for battle against enemy forces.

Here is the hanger is resides in when not in action.

Here is the 'wasted' diamond block placed solely to show off and be useless.

And up the steps we have Command.

Command uses hightech glass pokescreens to do... stuff.

I would like to say thank you to Mental_Atom, Bean and Silverzone for the extra cobble and sand, Dogboy for the 'wasted' diamond block, 23james698 for the location and support, and finally Shgecko for his anti-peptalk.
Edit: Forgot about the coords!
X: 70423
Z -48259
Y Look up
Thats about it! I hope this Airship showcases what can do, hopefully convincing the mods to accept my application. Thank you for your time. -Feircedeitylink

 

[23james698]

Thumbs up.

 

[Frenziedfox]

I forgot to mention I will give the mods Diamonds if they accept me.

 

[23james698]

I forgot to mention I will give the mods Diamonds if they accept me.

Bribing, eh? Might have to try that with mine.

 

[Frenziedfox]

Despite saying Trolls Welcome on the front, no troll has come. Where is Frothing?

 

[PD400]

If your going for a Steampunk look, I would use a different material than smooth stone. Perhaps use lightstone, iron blocks, wood, and smooth stone? I also think you should add more steampunk motifs to it, as it seems to be a little spacious.

 

[xnickx5757]

i think it would be kinda cool to see what it looked like with the actual steampunk texture pack

 

[WakiMikoArck]

Thank-you for applying for Builder status on our Creative world.

The mods have decided to Decline your application. You may re-apply in 7 days.

Don't feel disheartened that we have declined your appeal, with some extra hard work you may be successful next time!

How you can improve -

• More detail, more stuff

We appreciate the time you have taken for your application, good luck next time

 

[Frenziedfox]

Actually, I was still in the process of adding detail because I was counting on the mods taking two months.
If I finish adding detail can I resubmit the airship or do I have to build a another creation?

 

[WakiMikoArck]

You can resubmit if you'd like, just remember to wait at least one week. Try to give us a few more things to look at as well if you can. We'd much rather see a group of cool projects than a single project.

 

[Frenziedfox]

I'm very poor in build and most of that stuff was given to me. The only thing I do have is sand and netherack, and everyone hates my glass and netherack houses.

 

[PD400]

I have several stacks of smooth stone, and a smooth stone generator, if you would like to use it for a bit to get some.

 

[Frenziedfox]

I have several stacks of smooth stone, and a smooth stone generator, if you would like to use it for a bit to get some.

Smooth stone generator?

 

[PD400]

Smooth stone generator?

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[bast20432]

I think you should approve that