HudyBoy's Wiki Editor Applications

[Hudy]

Warp /Galion ( Team Panda )​

Leonardo, one of the many structures around this Public Warp​

This Public Warp features some of the greatest structures created on the server. They are all made by Team Panda, a group of players best known for the creations they build.​

• World: Build
• Location: Warp /Galion
• Creator(s): Team Panda
• Transport Links: Unknown
• Related/ Nearby Places: Build Spawn ( Approx. 5000 Blocks away )

About: This Public Warp was for a creation made by Wombatus. He was very proud of his ship, so he requested to get a Public Warp on it so others can see. He decided to make many more creations around the land because of all the free space. It later developed creations like "Dragon Corpse," and "Leonardo."
He then added a dragon to be, "attacking," the boat, revealed by the sign beside the warp. To this day it still amazes a lot of new and old members alike.

The Dragon Corpse:​

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The ship with the dragon:​

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[Hudy]

Spent a good hour on it!
Tell me what you think!

 

[FrothingLuck]

Warp /Galion ( Team Panda )​

View attachment 938Leonardo, one of the many structures around this Public Warp​

This Public Warp features some of the most (nothing is better than greatest) greatest structures created on the server. They are all made by Team Panda, a group of players best known for the creations they build.​

Other than that I think it looks awesome.

 

[Hudy]

Other than that I think it looks awesome.

Thanks for the compliment!

 

[Marine05]

Also, how about screenshots during the day rather than night? Hard to see on my laptop with its low gamma...

 

[Hudy]

Also, how about screenshots during the day rather than night? Hard to see on my laptop with its low gamma...

Want me to get some and repost on this thread?
That can be arranged.

 

[coffeejunky]

Agree with marine, same issue atm. "This Public Warp was for a creation made by Wombatus" This sentence is a bit redundant as the warp creator is already listed above, it means the article doesn't start with a 'punch' either. You also maybe use 'creation' a bit too often, try and vary the vocabulary you use a little more often. There are often many alternatives including naming teh object directly, or structure, or building. Nice effort though

 

[Hudy]

Nice effort though

Is that a compliment.. ?

 

[coffeejunky]

Yes!
I can see you put alot of effort into getting your punctuation and grammar correct.

 

[Hudy]

Who reviews the applications?

 

[oliverw92]

A group effort between moderators and admins. Mainly decided by people who created the wiki though.

Nice layout, except could you stick to the pre-defined format a little more? Your spacing is not quite right in many places, you are missing the 'Key Info' header, and the motto is formatted completely wrong. There is a full template on the Wiki Guidlines page. Your borders are also WAY too thick - they should be 2px max, and the pics should be in daylight unless absolutely necessary

 

[Hudy]

Would be great if I got a final verdict.

 

[oliverw92]

Sorry Hudy I should have got back to you yesterday,

We've decided 2 Wiki Editors is enough for now. You are probably going to ask 'why PD400 when I applied before him?'. He does this kind of thing for a living - writing public-facing articles and documents, meaning his grammar and spelling is always perfect. I'm not saying the page you put together was bad, it could probably be worded better, however. All wiki editors need to have perfect grammar - the last thing I want to have to do is have moderators spending time going over the pages wiki editors make to check for grammar, spelling mistakes etc.

 

[Hudy]

Will I be considered in the future?

 

[oliverw92]

If we find we need another Editor, you will be one of the first we consider

 

[oliverw92]

HudyBoy - So since Frothing is no longer around - congratulations, you are a Wiki Editor

 

[Hudy]

This brought a smile to my face.


Thank you guys.